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#1 by Anonymous (Nobody) at 18 May 2014 08:02:57 GMT
| The very core of your writing whlsit appearing agreeable initially, did not sit well with me personally after some time. Someplace throughout the paragraphs you were able to make me a believer but just for a very short while. I nevertheless have got a problem with your leaps in assumptions and you might do well to fill in those gaps. If you can accomplish that, I will definitely end up being impressed. |
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